Tied-Rough Cut

This is a rough version of our opening sequence for our movie 'Tied.' We ran into a few problems and have made a list of area's we need to work on just from watching the clips back through.
-Our movie is quite a lot shorter than we had hoped because we weren't able to use some of our clips. This was down to it being confusing for the audience and our main priority was to ensure our audience wasn't unsure by keeping it simple.
-We found the lighting and framing on some of our shots didn't look particularly professional and we are keen to go back and improve on these.
-The beginning is a bit jolty between our company title and the beginning of the film. We couldn't seem to make this smoother whatever we tried so when we will improve we will extend the clips and audio so it will be more smooth.
-Some of our shots are quite short and we think extending them may set the scene and ass some tension.
-The ratio of June screen time and Freddie screen time isn't evenly spread and we wanted it to be, so we will need to go back and add some scenes in which even the time out. This will mean we get a better idea of what Freddie is doing and it will give a bit more away about the characters because at the moment we feel its difficult to know much about them.
 We will post it on facebook and other social media accounts so we can get more feedback. This is also particularly useful because offering it to people are age means we are getting feedback from our target audience.
In addition to this we will show our actors the sequence and get their feedback because having been heavily involved in the process they will be good to get feedback from as they may be able to envision things we can do to benefit the scene.
From all the feedback we receive we will re shoot and make all the necessary adjustments.